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Acting out since 88'
6 degrees of seperation "Catcher in the Rye" monologue TAKE 1
I AM NOT OFF BOOK.. I am also not Will Smith and an not am imitator... I am doing this of my own experience... expression, and voice -CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM APPRECIATED.
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zozo_sweet
09:57 AM on February 27, 2011
Hi Destiney,
its a good start but I noticed a few things. Try not to be so literal with facial expression, its a little heavy. Maybe its just this piece, but its not coming across as very believable. I would love to see you recit something that you can see more more of yourself in.
Keep up the good work though, its always tough exposing yourself to critisism but thats how we get better.
Take care
zozo_sweet
its a good start but I noticed a few things. Try not to be so literal with facial expression, its a little heavy. Maybe its just this piece, but its not coming across as very believable. I would love to see you recit something that you can see more more of yourself in.
Keep up the good work though, its always tough exposing yourself to critisism but thats how we get better.
Take care
zozo_sweet
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